Beautifully written, poorly presented. It didn't have the worst sound ever, but it really could've sounded a lot better instrumentally. I think the part that turned me off most was the bass "solo" type thing. Bass seemed somewhat lame alone. But, you know it was still veritably kick ass. I don't mean to come off bashing as it's got potential. Perhaps you could call this a beta version and remake it. Who knows. Overall, I approve.