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HershDawg

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  1. Overall not bad but About 1/3 through it loses its energy. It regains some of it when the piano comes in. When you hit the break it doesn't have the impact it could. The guitar parts are nice and it could use more of them. Overall what you need to do is try increasing the energy of the song. Experiment more with dynamics and maybe have the tempo increase at some point. just some suggestions. Id love to hear the finished product.

  2. Nice quality of sounds. The bass line is extremely repetitive but the higher parts make it alot more harmonically interesting. I might suggest on the flute break that you might add another flute and make it add a third harmony that is not moving parallel to the other 2. This would make that part a little more interesting. I love all the sections when you change the lost woods them to a minor key though. Nice remix just a little suggestions thats all.

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