Mordi Posted June 7, 2008 Share Posted June 7, 2008 What genre is this? Let me know if you enjoy listening to it. New version: Link Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WillRock Posted June 7, 2008 Share Posted June 7, 2008 Nice work, this is very relaxing and atmosphic. I do like the lead instrument and the melodies you have are good. However, I think it's all abit similar. The song doesn't seem to head anywhere particuly. What i would do is create a catchy melody, which you are good at - the melodic phases you use are very good - have the breakdown, and repeat the melody with slight varitions in melody and instrumentation, expand on it. I'm not sure that is your goal however, but it lacks a hook that will make your track more memerable. However, i do like this - the timbre of the track overall is good and i like the idea. Nice work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mordi Posted June 7, 2008 Author Share Posted June 7, 2008 Updated it. Its a bit better now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mordi Posted June 9, 2008 Author Share Posted June 9, 2008 Near final version! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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