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Nice work, this is very relaxing and atmosphic. I do like the lead instrument and the melodies you have are good. However, I think it's all abit similar. The song doesn't seem to head anywhere particuly. What i would do is create a catchy melody, which you are good at - the melodic phases you use are very good - have the breakdown, and repeat the melody with slight varitions in melody and instrumentation, expand on it.

I'm not sure that is your goal however, but it lacks a hook that will make your track more memerable.

However, i do like this - the timbre of the track overall is good and i like the idea.

Nice work.

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