Chickenwarlord Posted June 22, 2008 Share Posted June 22, 2008 Inside the UFO Alright, after a long time of crawling around the WIP boards and criticizing others, I have finally decided that I want to continue work on a WIP and make it OCR material. I know of some problems i.e. lack of melodic and harmonic interpretation, and the completely random synth blips towards the end. However, I don't really know a lot of the technical issues. If you would help me pinpoint and eliminate these, I would be most thankful. Original I've attempted to make the original more ambient and dissonant. Fire criticisms away! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JH Sounds Posted June 22, 2008 Share Posted June 22, 2008 I was just now listening to this. Weird... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noTuX Posted June 22, 2008 Share Posted June 22, 2008 I kinda like it, though it is a bit repetitive at first. I would add panning effects to those synths at the beginning and even more so to the synths that come in at 0:25. Also the main melody should be brought out more and it needs percussion. I would start the percussion off with something simple and add more and more layers to it and the song moves forward. Maybe an introduction of some sort of drum sequencing would be nice around 1:04. Thats all I can think of right now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therapsid Posted June 24, 2008 Share Posted June 24, 2008 Isn't that from PRC120 or something at Remix ThaSauce? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JH Sounds Posted June 24, 2008 Share Posted June 24, 2008 Isn't that from PRC120 or something at Remix ThaSauce? It was PRC121, but yeah. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therapsid Posted June 27, 2008 Share Posted June 27, 2008 Oh I see Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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