humanworm Posted July 14, 2008 Posted July 14, 2008 Hey, this is my first attempt. I haven't been working on it for very long. C + C welcome, just let me know if it's any good or worth improving. http://www.box.net/shared/op9aisa4os Thanks Quote
Cloral Posted July 14, 2008 Posted July 14, 2008 The lead is too quiet in comparison to the percussion. I had to turn my headphones up quite a bit before I heard anything other than the drums. Quote
Rozovian Posted July 15, 2008 Posted July 15, 2008 You need to compress the bass drum a lot. The track is too quiet, but you've got some high peaks. Limiter on the master, compression on percussion, possibly on bass too. It's also very simple, both arrangement and processing. It's also repetitive and short. Not sure about the source. It sounds nothing like the nes source I found, so if you're using another source, link it. Overall, this is repetitive and unrefined. And short. It has a kind'a nice feel tho, so it's worth working on. Quote
Therapsid Posted July 15, 2008 Posted July 15, 2008 Next time use Tindeck.com. About the mix: seems nice Quote
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