D/P Canalave City Funk/Ballad Mix

[PROTO·DOME]

Okay, in really early stages still (not nearly finished) however I kinda liked the song itself and thought I'd throw it in FL and see what came out. Yeah, was not my inital intention to make it a ballad but heck- I like the bass ^^ I know the sax sounds a lil' lame so I'll probably end up recording it myself.

Yeah, it would be awesome if you could tell me what what you think- especially on the arranging side, what would be good to do next?

Here it is!

http://download50.mediafire.com/5zcxlsy0yzzg/n1ytmijyimu/Canalave+City.mp3

[The Damned]

Yes, please put it back up. I'd like to hear this.

(If I like it, you want to submit it to a certain project?)

[PROTO·DOME]

Okay, didn't realise my account screwed up. Ah well, fixed now. Yeah here it is again-

http://download54.mediafire.com/l003mxhvj3mg/gzkgjjmntlm/Canalave+City+Mix.mp3

I haven't worked on this in a while and listening to it again I think I might. So yeah, please criticise the hell outta it- it'll help more than trying to be nice ^^ It's veeeery ambient listening to it over and a lil' boring. I'm working on that now but anything y'think I've missed or should put in lemme know.

Oh and it just fades out, it's not finished. (Before people tell me it's too short, I know)

(Oh and in response to The Damned: I doubt you'll like it but heck, sure, why not? )

[SplinterOfChaos]

0:44 -- Those trumpets are too strong considering the lax everything else... maybe