ShAuNmAn-X Posted March 2, 2009 Share Posted March 2, 2009 I've been working on a few different songs lately and I wanted to see what the OCR community thought about this one. I have a couple original works and other works in progress on there as well but they are still in need of some work. Zero X2 Somewhat Brutal is the first song in the playlist. Let me know what you think. Feel free to check out the other ones if you want to but they are only there for the moment to undergo review from some people I know. http://www.purevolume.com/shaunmanx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eino Keskitalo Posted March 2, 2009 Share Posted March 2, 2009 As a short demo, a simple arrangement for two tracks of guitar, this works. It has a consistent mood. I quite like the two final parts, the first with the different lead, and then the picking. The tone of the rhythm guitar is rather bassy/muddy. Need to leave room for the bass. --Eino Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rozovian Posted March 2, 2009 Share Posted March 2, 2009 It's muddy. You need to separate them better. When the synthy sound comes in 1:09 it's completely drowned in the rhythm track. Needs to be cleaner so you can hear what's going on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShAuNmAn-X Posted March 7, 2009 Author Share Posted March 7, 2009 Thanks for the input. I'll work on it some more and I'll keep you posted. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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