djpretzel Posted November 29, 2003 Share Posted November 29, 2003 OK .. here's the deal. In August of last year, I submitted a remix to OCR. It kind of fell through the cracks, so on Wednesday, February 12, I submitted Yoshi's Story 'Island Echoes' OC ReMix in its place, and I haven't got a response since. I of course realized the delay long ago, but have been putting off this e-mail for a long time. Title: Yoshi's Story 'Island Echoes' OC ReMix By: Kooper909 Also! On my Remixer Info page, please add this image: http://www.fortestar.com/images/Avatar_Kooper909.jpg And change my home page address to http://www.fortestar.com/ , please. Thank you very much. I would really appreciate it if you could rush this ... it's been a year. I could have had a baby by now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protricity Posted November 30, 2003 Share Posted November 30, 2003 This is a nice intro for a song. At 2:23 you should start the actual song. Get into something. This is just an intro. Go for more. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malcos Posted December 11, 2003 Share Posted December 11, 2003 Hmm, this has promise, but then doesn't deliver on that promise. The problem for me is that this is all on one level, no climax, no breakdown, no change or transitions in the whole song with regard to mood or direction. One gets bored towards the end of the second half. I would say keep the magical sound of the mix and develop this into something more after about a minute and a half. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrayLightning Posted December 14, 2003 Share Posted December 14, 2003 Yep, as malcos mentioned, this mix is just magical. I am enjoying the whole style of this mix. Main problem here is, it needs more development and expansion. Either increase the instrumentation or add more complexity to the composition. I agree this is a great start, but its shortness does leave an unsatisfying feeling. It feels like it's part of a much grander mix that never comes. NO for now. Please consider resubmitting after more work has been done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vig Posted December 14, 2003 Share Posted December 14, 2003 yeah...this is an intro, this is too short, it doesnt develop, etc. and i have some problems with the piano encoding in the turnaround. Basically, this needs more. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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