Cree` Posted April 30, 2009 Share Posted April 30, 2009 Heres a semi-old WIP that I dugg out of the vault. I'm aware of the tempo issues, but here is what I got so far. Take a listen, and if you have to do so cover your ears! Click here to download creatine.mp3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icebird Posted April 30, 2009 Share Posted April 30, 2009 I like the feel of it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robotaki Posted April 30, 2009 Share Posted April 30, 2009 Jeez man you've really improved. I love the environment you've made here. It's really warm sounding, and the chord progression you've chosen is almost hypnotic. Are all these sounds coming from your (semi-)newly acquired GPO library? Hey you know what would KILL in this piece? Some ambient, not necessarily rhythmically structured percussion sounds, heavily reverberated...and some soft glocks! These are really spontaneous ideas but I really like what you have here. Keep going m8! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jezon2000 Posted May 1, 2009 Share Posted May 1, 2009 I was kind of feeling NiN at the beginning, but I think you're closer to some other bands. That said, you've got good sensibilities and things work together nicely in this track, but it could use a little development. I felt like once the guitar left, the song felt stronger. Either use it throughout the track and develop it, or lose it, I think. You've got a goodelegiac feel, but it seems like you're stuck between NIN and going in a completely different direction. Ambient is a tricky genre. You have a good hook, but I still think a melody that appears during the buildup or at the pinnacle of the track could really bring this together more. For example: This has a hook and accompaniment, like yours, but a melody still comes in later, and brings it all together. The melody is not that far off from the hook, composition-wise, but it still works. Personally, I think you're more in this direction than NIN : ) Cheers Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B33J Posted May 23, 2009 Share Posted May 23, 2009 Hey man. Go listen to NIN's "Adrift and at Peace" song. I'd REALLY like to hear some pretty low, wide, synthed bass stuff like what comes in near 1:40, for your song. I think it'd fit pretty well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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