Chiwalker Posted May 17, 2009 Share Posted May 17, 2009 Hey, I'm looking for some feedback before I submit. It is a remix of Crystal Caves from Donkey Kong 64. I was going for a trance style, but I am limited in my abilities to do a lot of that fancy trance stoof Update: Source: - Thanks XZero Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XZero Posted May 17, 2009 Share Posted May 17, 2009 Source: I like what you have so far. One recommendation I have is that it feels like it's missing something. Maybe this isn't what you are going for, but I'd add a section after the main "theme" and the subtheme (1:24 - 1:53, and 1:54 - 2:58, respectively) that combines the two with the main theme playing over the subtheme. I'm not sure it would work, and I'm confident that someone with actual musical abilities can be more helpful, but that's my two cents. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rozovian Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 Yep, I can hear the source there for a lot of the time. That's as far as I'll deal with the source, I suck at source analysis. My main complaint would be that it sounds kind'a empty. You could add another pad, with midrange chords, or some other mid-range backing. You might also want to balance your percussion more, it sounds like the whole track is leaning or bend sideways while you're using those congas or whatever. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chiwalker Posted June 14, 2009 Author Share Posted June 14, 2009 Hey I've been working on this a lot more - I need help knowing what to do to make this "listenable" I don't know the necessary steps in finishing and touching up a remix in it's final process. This is where I need help. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackPanther Posted June 14, 2009 Share Posted June 14, 2009 Doesn't work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chiwalker Posted June 14, 2009 Author Share Posted June 14, 2009 Doesn't work. Thanks for the helpful and insightful feedback! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XZero Posted June 14, 2009 Share Posted June 14, 2009 Thanks for the helpful and insightful feedback! It was insightful. The link doesn't work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chiwalker Posted June 15, 2009 Author Share Posted June 15, 2009 Awkward, ok sorry it worked for me...let's try this (I edited it) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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