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Somewhat awkward orchestra remix of aeris theme. Pretty much the original progression was followed through a full loop. Lots of high quality instruments that aren't really used too well. Lots of awkward jumpy tempo changes. I'm not too impressed by the chord changes. Makes it into a rather undynamic song. Strings have no release at all, they just cut off.

All sounds too manufactured. Take these problems into consideration and resubmit.

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A lot of thick chords that I'm really not a fan of. Strings sound really unnatural and cut too quickly. Leads are unexpressive and the entire arrangement is a bit too short for what it attempts to accomplish. Piano was kind of awkward and jumpy in the opening part too.

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This has been here for a bit eh?

Great sounds, but wow those strings cut off way too quickly. The piano also sounds strange in terms of it's release, particularly at the very end of the song. Could be longer as well. This could sound really good, but it needs more work. Expand in all areas plz.

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