eppskevin Posted December 31, 2009 Posted December 31, 2009 This is an original tune of mine that I tried to give some hip hop flavor to yet again. I would say this is finished, but I would let you guys be the judge! Thanks in advance for your suggestions! Quote
eppskevin Posted January 1, 2010 Author Posted January 1, 2010 I'm just bumping to prevent the thread from getting buried is all. I'm not rushing or anything. Quote
James_The_Composer Posted January 1, 2010 Posted January 1, 2010 Great stuff. =) Love the song. Very much cold blooded. Is there, perhaps, an mp3 or higher quality version that we could view? About the sonic properties of the sample... I really can't give much critique. As it is, it's perfect. The thing is, maybe you could raise this or that, but that would alter the style of it, and I don't think it would improve anything sonically, it would just make it sound a tad bit different from the original (but of course it would be the same song no matter what you do to it). Quote
Peach Posted January 1, 2010 Posted January 1, 2010 Nice work for the genre. Syncopation gives this composition a strong flair. The vocals (vox) are particularly interesting. Quote
Obtuse Posted January 9, 2010 Posted January 9, 2010 I like this. It has a great vibe. I have one major beef with it. The 8 note repeated phrase (Square wavish sound) goes nowhere. It just keeps repeating. It's really monotonous. I personally think it would sound great without it. You have so much other interesting stuff going on. If you are keen to keeping that sound in there, perhaps you could change the melodic phrase or make it into a sixteen note phrase (vary the 8 note phrase and and use different notes from the musical scale). Quote
A-RoN Posted January 11, 2010 Posted January 11, 2010 Agreed. The synth is quite repetitive. But it does work in terms of keeping things flowing. My real concern is the stab that's used. It sounds like the pitch has been lowered to make it grimey, but in doing so, lost it's "umph." Maybe try throwing on some EQ to enhance the hit or try another stab. EDIT: BTW, caught the one you uploaded on Absolutely, love it! Quote
eppskevin Posted August 16, 2010 Author Posted August 16, 2010 A whole 8 months later..... Sorry guys, Ended up having a BUNCH of computer problems and then just got major busy.. Thanks for your responses! I actually agree with the stabs. I'm going to clean this up even more. Quote
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