Liontamer Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 Weird enough that I had to panel it - LT Remix Title: Imaginary Gutsman Remixed by Imaginary Film Club Name: Ruphus Gee imaginaryfilmclub@yahoo.com www.imaginaryfilmclub.com ID: 30613 Mega Man 1987 Gutsman Stage Enjoy! - Ruphy ------------------------------------------------------------ Mega Man - "Gutsman Stage" I'm probably more down with this weird stuff than the other judges, and could actually see this on the site if it were subbed 8-10 years ago. Well, I get that you're going for something sonically unique. It's certainly a minimalist take that's heavy on odd sounds & textures. But that doesn't exempt the track from being underdeveloped overall. If the melodic writing didn't sound so atonal for portions of the track, and the textures were fleshed out further, this could have a shot as something decidedly different than what we get. See if you can add a bit more substance to this one, Drew. It was at least interesting for being odd. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anosou Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 Not much to say here. The arrangement needs to be fleshed out more to be a passable arrangement. Using more than 1-2 instruments would probably help a lot The "voice" was so low pitched it seemed more atonal than it could've, it didn't think it worked at all. The textures, while unique, aren't very sophisticated and can't carry the track on their own. The ending is also extremely abrupt. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OceansAndrew Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 definitely an interesting listen, with some cool ideas, but yeah, it is harshely underdeveloped, and lacks cohesion. The first step to improve this would be to add some additional instruments; maybe some pads to give a legato backing field for all of the textures to inhabit. Keeping some dedicated percussion throughout would also help this gel, and a proper ending is never a bad idea. no Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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