motoldm Posted March 23, 2010 Posted March 23, 2010 I've been working on the famous Dragon Warrior Overworld song and am looking to submit it. Please let me know what you guys think, so far or any changes/corrections that would be helpful. Thank you! Click here for song Quote
motoldm Posted March 25, 2010 Author Posted March 25, 2010 No one? My deadline is the weekend, so anything at all would helpful, thanks. Quote
ZealPath Posted March 26, 2010 Posted March 26, 2010 Good variations from the source here, though you manage to keep it present as well while deviating in different ways throughout. Not a huge variety of instruments, but I think it works pretty well the way it is. I'm not very technical when it comes to music but I like what you've done. This is really low-key, and I'm not sure whether that would help or hinder it, but the quality certainly isn't bad and you have the all-important variation from the source covered. Quote
Emunator Posted March 26, 2010 Posted March 26, 2010 The intro part sounds like it's way too drowned in reverb, so I'd recommend taking that down a tad. Overall, it's a pretty solid arrangement, although I think it goes on a bit long. I think you could cut some of the meat out of this and bring it down to 3:30 or 4:00 and still retain the majority of the effect from it. I really like the groove and especially when your bass ranges pick up, it's pretty good for an atmospheric groove track. I can't think of any specific critiques, I think you pretty much nailed the genre you were going for. Best of luck with whatever you're submitting this for! Quote
motoldm Posted March 26, 2010 Author Posted March 26, 2010 Thanks... Finally, some feedback... I really appreciate it, ZealPath and Emunator, Time to get to work. Quote
Emunator Posted March 26, 2010 Posted March 26, 2010 Yeah, if you ever need feedback again and it's not coming, shoot me a PM. It's my job to handle this thing so if your thread somehow slips through the cracks, let me, Nutritious or halc know That said, I don't think there's much that could change with your WIP, it's a very good one! Quote
motoldm Posted March 26, 2010 Author Posted March 26, 2010 I think I am finished. Thanks for the feedback. Quote
ShrackAttack Posted March 27, 2010 Posted March 27, 2010 Yeah man, I definitely like it as well. Probably going to be downloading this. Nice job. Quote
Melbu Frahma Posted March 27, 2010 Posted March 27, 2010 Wow. What you've got here is extremely good. I'll be very surprised if they reject it. Great work, man. Quote
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