Vidilian Posted September 6, 2010 Share Posted September 6, 2010 Made a new thread so I could add the prefix thing. I followed the critiques from the last one and can't really think of anything to improve on but there are probably still some issues that i cant personally spot. Sources in order: ReMix: https://sites.google.com/site/vspaine/wips/PWmedley.mp3?attredirects=0&d=1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rozovian Posted September 12, 2010 Share Posted September 12, 2010 Not gonna listen to source despite your neat and organized listing of them. Too many. Piano seems a lot more distant than the epiano, an annoying disparity you should probably fix. Same with the bells, whatever they are. For most of the track, it doesn't feel like the louder, forte notes (on the regular piano) are justified. Most of them anyway. 1:20 - I know that melody! circa 2:15 - some timing issues. 2:20 - ARGHLOUD! note. Cool, but needs more balance. Also, less ARGHLOUD! stuff. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nabeel Ansari Posted September 12, 2010 Share Posted September 12, 2010 I spy lava reef zone at 1:17 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vidilian Posted September 13, 2010 Author Share Posted September 13, 2010 @ Rozovian: Thanks for feedback. Glad the issues are things that I can sort out relatively easily. I was worried that the song was too short for all those sources but it works out i guess. @ neblix: I see what your saying lol. Thats the turnabout sisters theme though. Didnt even notice they started with basically the same notes till you said that... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vidilian Posted October 29, 2010 Author Share Posted October 29, 2010 I'd like to think I've got the balance right now so I've switched the prefix to Mod review. Hopefully you guys can take take the time to look at this soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vidilian Posted November 18, 2010 Author Share Posted November 18, 2010 Did another slight update to give me an excuse to bump this before it goes too far down the pages. Sorry about that. Just want this to get a Mod review before I consider submitting it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emunator Posted November 22, 2010 Share Posted November 22, 2010 I'm still feeling like the e-piano is a bit too loud most of the time, though the sounds are pretty well chosen. Arrangement tends to feel a little plodding, like there's not really much of a structure/sense of direction to it. I personally don't mind, but it's something the judges will probably knock you for. The performance isn't the best either, I'm noticing a lot of mistimed notes throughout the song, most noticeably during the Turnabout Sisters section, where the theme just feels pretty sloppy Last bit of critique, you're getting a LOT of background buzzing feedback from something in the setup... unfortunately, due to how you use silence in your arrangement (which is a pretty well-executed technique) it really feels like a bit of a dealbreaker To sum it up, some very cool takes on certain themes, great soundscape/sound choices, and overall an interesting and mostly enjoyable listen, but I'm not really feeling like this would fare well on the judge's panel. Sorry. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vidilian Posted November 22, 2010 Author Share Posted November 22, 2010 K thanks for the review. Saved me from submitting this one. I'm gonna move on and work on something else, since I'm all out of ideas for this one. Thanks again Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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