DragonAvenger Posted May 29, 2011 Share Posted May 29, 2011 Song is an Alice in Wonderland and Grimoire of Alice medley from Touhou 4. Going for a flamenco style with a bit of classical as well. Remixer name: Zero16 ---------- - Wonderland - Grimoire Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OceansAndrew Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 Little bit of shuffling at the beginning and end gave this a sort of bedroom recording charm, and though there wasn't a lot of high end brilliance in the recording, the sound was decently warm. The dynamics overall felt pretty subdued, and the song overall felt a little bit like it was going through the motions, with the performance being technically sound, but not really featuring a lot of emotion. Overall the arrangement played it pretty close to the source, with the benefit of being performed live and the arrangement simplified for being on a single guitar. I would have preferred more melodic interpretation in the second half, as it repeats the A section a few times, and while there is variation near the end sectionwise, it feels like a very solid WIP, but lacs a bit of finish. I think this is close, but needs a bit extra to put it over for me. No, please resubmit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonAvenger Posted June 3, 2011 Author Share Posted June 3, 2011 Andrew really got this one. Great sources to work with, and I like the warm sort of songtale feel you've got going on here, but right now it needs a little more emotion to really make it come alive. I'd like to see you work with more of the dynamics, and maybe a few rubato sections will help out as well. The sources are used well, but I'd like to see more interpretation to add more flavor also. NO (resubmit) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
halc Posted June 11, 2011 Share Posted June 11, 2011 not a lot to add to what the other J's have already pointed out. I like the tone, but the EQ is a bit too dark and muffled for my tastes, and could definitely shine more in the high end. the arrangement is pretty static and needs more momentum; some more expressive dynamic range would definitely be a good step in the right direction. NO(resub) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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