Seiken Densetsu 3 Evening Star Re=arrangement

[NinjaFlute]

Seiken Densetsu 3 (aka Secret of Mana 2) holds some of the best melody throughout my childhood. Today I decided to start a new project on this theme ---

Source:

Remake: http://soundcloud.com/linjaflu/evening-star-linjaflu-mix

So what do you all think?

[NinjaFlute]

updated, bump

[cvramen]

Love the strings you've got starting at about 1:40.

The celeste playing the melody at 0:00-1:20 is pretty darn good. Try somewhere in that part, introducing an additional instrument, so that there are two instruments playing the same notes simultaneously, see what that sounds like.

I assume you still are working on the ending. The ending would be better if you just had the celeste by itself and stopped the guitar part (is that a guitar?) before the last few seconds.

[Guifrog]

Um, sparse. Enjoyable at the first minutes, but then it needs something else. But it's a WIP anyway XD

I found the strings to be very convincing until 0:52. There's abrupt pauses on those articulations as they play. You think it's possible to liquify 'em?

AH, I LOVE PIZZA \@/ Could hear that section forever!

Guitar's decent, but this is where I find things to lack spice. As you work on your WIP, give your energy to it! It's a pretty nice intimate piece