DragonAvenger Posted June 19, 2011 Share Posted June 19, 2011 Remixer Name : 4AM Real Name : Andrew Yi Email : Krnxlancer@gmail.com Webstie : NA Userid : 45386 Name of game : Ilo Milo Name of arrangement : Me and my shuffle Name of individual songs arranged : Ilo Milo Intro and Me and my paper plane. Link to original : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nmKWHyH8zCU&feature=related and http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nvq_ThE1GBk&feature=related Comments : I just had fun making this one, I figured it would sound neat and just started plunking stuff out on the piano then got a little beat in my head and said hey why not? Made it from scratch on FL studios 10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OceansAndrew Posted June 28, 2011 Share Posted June 28, 2011 I like how this starts out, and feel that the arrangement is pretty fun. THe transitions between themes aren't great, and i think a drum fill would have worked better than record scratches. Beyond the cool style, there isn't much interpretation, and once you've heard both sections once, you've heard the entire song. I love the feel of this, but I think it needs to be expanded on further. No, please resubmit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
halc Posted July 19, 2011 Share Posted July 19, 2011 what a strange source tune. I quite enjoy it. the bass was a little plain (and a bit overpowering on the lower notes), but otherwise I liked the sounds at play here. however, as OA mentioned, the arrangement could be fleshed out a lot more, and the transition in and out of the shuffle was a little weak, though I liked the idea. NO(resub) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonAvenger Posted August 6, 2011 Author Share Posted August 6, 2011 The biggest issue is definitely that the song becomes repetitious. There's plenty you can do to add variation between the runs of the song, and right now you've got a nice base to work with. I like the combination of instruments, including the bass ( Halc), but it wouldn't hurt to add or take away some parts to spice things up as well. NO (resubmit) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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