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Hey Ruku, not a bad effort here! It does sound a little muddy in the mid-lows though - you can tell when you remove them at around 1:59, the whole thing gets a lot cleaner. I'd say it needs a bit more EQ work and perhaps a bit less reverb to make individual parts stand out a bit more. At the moment it seems to lack dynamics, without really having a clear beginning, middle and end. You should definitely throw in some sort of bridge section with a different beat and some original material to break the song up, maybe around 1:30 or 2:00 (I know there's sort of a breakdown at 2:00 but I'm thinking a bigger departure than that).

I did enjoy it though, and am just being critical to help you improve and have a shot at getting it posted. Keep going with it :)

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