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*NO* Jazz Jackrabbit 'This Jackrabbit Is Augmented'


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Hi there,

I'm submitting a track for EdenShard, which is a band composed of myself and Logan Felber. Here's the data:

ReMixer name: EdenShard

Real Name: John French/Logan Felber

Email Address: Jerionmusic@gmail.com

Website: http://edenshard.bandcamp.com

Userid: 47441

Game: Jazz Jackrabbit 2

The title of our arrangement is "This Jackrabbit is Augmented"

The track it was based on is "Laboratory Level"

Track is attached. If that does not work it may also be found here:

The composer of the original track was Alexander Brandon.

Note: The EdenShard OCRemix forum account is awaiting activation at time of sending this message.

Cheers,

John French

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Those first notes made me think I was listening to some

I like Gaga, so this is a good thing. I think this track is pretty good overall, but there are some things that are pulling it down as is. The first is that the track is wayyyy close to the source, both structurally and melodically. I was waiting for you to break out into a solo or your own thing, but it never happened, and I felt like I was listening to the track on loop a few times. There are a ton of cool details that you've added, but it needs more arrangement!

Your drum loop gets way boring pretty fast. For all the other details you have added, the fact that it's stuck in one gear surprises me. I'd love to hear some fills and change-ups! Production overall is OK, although there seems to be not much bass presence for a lot of the track. Overall there are some areas that could be humanized as well.

The source itself is pretty fantastic, and I can see why you'd want to keep it in tact, but I think this just stays too close to the source, and the drums need some fixin' up. Hope you look this one over again.

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