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*NO* Pokémon Emerald Version 'The Attuned Tune of a Zigzagoon'


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Your ReMixer name- JoePotato28

Your real name- Joe

Your website- http://www.youtube.com/user/JoePotato28?feature=mhee

Name of game(s) arranged- Pokémon Emerald

Name of arrangement- The Attuned Tune of a Zigzagoon

Name of individual song(s) arranged- Petalburg Woods

Link to the original soundtrack (if it is not one of the sound archives already available on the site)-

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definitely suffering from a lot of generic sounds here, and the fact that they never change really makes the song feel repetitive. there are some nice flourishes but the arrangement just feels too sparse and uninspired. sorry to sound negative here, at face value nothing is terrible, the execution is just amateur. keep practicing and look to our workshop forum for more advice.

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Yeah there's quite a lot of things that can be improved here.

The clap and cymbal samples are pretty awful, kick and snare not much better. Build up with the bass is far too long and doesn't drop very well at the end of it. Pretty much all the sounds have an air of FL studio default samples/presets mashed together, which inevitably won't gel together properly. Not saying thats necessarily the case, but thats the impression I get.

For the arrangement, the original is sparse so it's kind of to be expected that the remix would be but the question is why did you pick this source when there are others that would work much better from the game in this style. You've also then stretched it out to be really long which doesn't help the sparseness at all.

There are a few cool ideas here and there but you've got to step back and look at it as a whole to see if it's working, and it isn't. I echo halc's recommendation, you can find a lot of help in the wip forum!

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