DragonAvenger Posted January 29, 2012 Share Posted January 29, 2012 Your ReMixer name- JoePotato28 Your real name- Joe Your website- http://www.youtube.com/user/JoePotato28?feature=mhee Name of game(s) arranged- Pokémon Emerald Name of arrangement- The Attuned Tune of a Zigzagoon Name of individual song(s) arranged- Petalburg Woods Link to the original soundtrack (if it is not one of the sound archives already available on the site)- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
halc Posted March 27, 2012 Share Posted March 27, 2012 definitely suffering from a lot of generic sounds here, and the fact that they never change really makes the song feel repetitive. there are some nice flourishes but the arrangement just feels too sparse and uninspired. sorry to sound negative here, at face value nothing is terrible, the execution is just amateur. keep practicing and look to our workshop forum for more advice. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishy Posted April 4, 2012 Share Posted April 4, 2012 Yeah there's quite a lot of things that can be improved here. The clap and cymbal samples are pretty awful, kick and snare not much better. Build up with the bass is far too long and doesn't drop very well at the end of it. Pretty much all the sounds have an air of FL studio default samples/presets mashed together, which inevitably won't gel together properly. Not saying thats necessarily the case, but thats the impression I get. For the arrangement, the original is sparse so it's kind of to be expected that the remix would be but the question is why did you pick this source when there are others that would work much better from the game in this style. You've also then stretched it out to be really long which doesn't help the sparseness at all. There are a few cool ideas here and there but you've got to step back and look at it as a whole to see if it's working, and it isn't. I echo halc's recommendation, you can find a lot of help in the wip forum! NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OceansAndrew Posted April 5, 2012 Share Posted April 5, 2012 Triple recommendation for the WIP forum, there are some good ideas here, but there needs to be additional production and arrangement refinement. The soundscape needs to filled out in a lot of sections, and improving thr drum sound will be pretty important. Keep at it though! no Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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