The legend of Zelda - Tal Tal Heights (Remix)

[The2ndHope]

Check this out

its my first attemp

i hope you like it anyways

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rdvz_-V9Hug

[DarkSim]

I like it, but it's more of a cover - try adding your own variations on the theme to make it stand out. Add in an original breakdown or something as a starting point and go from there.

[Rozovian]

Too loud, too simple, too similar (for ocr at least), too many key clashes.

You have a lot to learn, but it sounds like you've got decent tools to make some good stuff. Just needs more practice.