djpretzel Posted September 15, 2005 Share Posted September 15, 2005 original decision - http://www.ocremix.org/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=64515 Hi! Just a resubmission, made a few small edits. Cheers! /Daniel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zircon Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 To be honest, after listening to both versions several times and comparing them side by side, I can't hear ANY significant differences at all, or even minor ones. My original decision still stands. Dunno what's up with this one. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Liontamer Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 http://www.zophar.net/nsf/smb1.zip - Track 2 ("Underground BGM") Yeah, I dunno what's up with this RESUB, but nah. Not much different than before. The SFX seems less gratuitous, but if anything, it sounds more cluttered. Gotta go beyond these minor tweaks, honestly. It's like you didn't read the previous decision. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harmony Posted September 22, 2005 Share Posted September 22, 2005 Yeah, I’m not hearing enough variation from the original submission for my decision to be changed. Most important for me, the lack of development remains. That’s cool though, don’t let the panel steal your sunshine, Sunshine. This is a really fun song and if you don’t want to change it, I think you should leave it just the way it is. As the late Bob Ross always said of art, "It's your little world." NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrayLightning Posted September 23, 2005 Share Posted September 23, 2005 I didn't vote on the previous one, but from the beginning this was immediately problematic. The synths sound so over eq'd. There's a lot of sharp treble and nothing else going on throughout the mix. We have the lead, some basic background instrumentation supporting it and a very loud drum pattern throughout. Sure it's a dance mix and supposed to sound loud. But this got immediately repetitive and dull. The concept and execution works as a good framework. I'd like to hear you add more supporting material, evolution of the structure. As it is now, it gets really redundant not even halfway through. The sound FX work (sometimes) and are nice reminders of the game, but when they're this overused it ceases to be of interest. I'd also like to hear some instrumentation change ups as well. The texture of the piece was really stagnant with the same sounding basic instruments throughout. More variety and evolution please. Enjoyable on some levels but needs a lot more work in my view. This shows promise and I'd like to hear a revamp of this with a lot more work (not few small edits). Keep at it though. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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