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"Ruinous Deep" -- Pokémon Black, White & sequels


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Dude, did you seriously go spamming people's visitor walls for this?

People will listen if you give them time, but they won't listen if you pester. You posted your mix yesterday; be patient.

Haha sorry, sometimes I get a little antsy. I feel like an idiot right now, so I guess I accomplished the opposite of what I set out to do. I hope I didn't sour anyone, as that's not what I want. :S

I tend to be a little bad at being a newbie, especially on larger forums. At any rate, I apologise for coming off like a spammer, as that isn't what I intended to do at all!

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Haha sorry, sometimes I get a little antsy. I feel like an idiot right now, so I guess I accomplished the opposite of what I set out to do. I hope I didn't sour anyone, as that's not what I want. :S

I tend to be a little bad at being a newbie, especially on larger forums. At any rate, I apologise for coming off like a spammer, as that isn't what I intended to do at all!

I know how it feels to be antsy about getting feedback and all. I went through the same phase, but I also learned that feedback requires patience on these boards (due, in part, to how long it takes to respond to a remix)--so I try to provide feedback to mixes that don't have many replies.

OK, so! I'm new to this piece, but I've given it a few listens and I think I can understand the gist of it. I'm gonna do a little stream of consciousness about your remix because that makes it easier for me to write honestly:

The water noise at the beginning is a bit obnoxious to me. The initial sound of waves is nice, but the bubbly part after that was a bit wonky. Okay, moving on! Nice low-pass sounds in the backgrounds, but perhaps with a bit too much resonance. The drum kit sounds odd and out of place--it has too much reverb and is overall too bright, IMO. I'd experiment with different sounds if I were you. The stutter in the main backing chords was a bit jarring, but sounded pretty cool I suppose. Honestly, though, it's hard for me to tell how much this piece adheres to the source due to a lack of melody--I'm assuming you're going to throw that in later.

Good effort so far. You've got a pretty good starting point. I'd recommend listening to it over and over again and cutting out things that you don't like. Don't worry: you'll always come up with better ideas to replace those :)

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