NyxTheShield Posted April 5, 2015 Share Posted April 5, 2015 (edited) I think this game was one of the first ones that made impact on me so i felt like making a cover of A Wish, my favourite track from the game. Any feedback is greatly appreciated (I know is in youtube but any feedback that can help me make this OCR worthy would be good, i am willing to heavily change it in order to achieve that heh) Edited April 5, 2015 by NyxTheShield Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timaeus222 Posted April 6, 2015 Share Posted April 6, 2015 It's nice, but as it is, though the short length doesn't necessarily constitute a *NO*, one could argue that it's too short for the amount of development it has. At the moment that's probably the only issue here. So, maybe make it longer, into a more complete work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NyxTheShield Posted April 7, 2015 Author Share Posted April 7, 2015 It's nice, but as it is, though the short length doesn't necessarily constitute a *NO*, one could argue that it's too short for the amount of development it has. At the moment that's probably the only issue here. So, maybe make it longer, into a more complete work. I think i have a great idea. Would some vocals spice this up haha? (Female) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timaeus222 Posted April 7, 2015 Share Posted April 7, 2015 Needs more than just additional vocals. Right now as I compare to the original, it's pretty close/conservative. As you make a longer arrangement, a soundscape as sparse as this one asks for both more compositional and textural development. Maybe some immersive pads, bells, and maybe ambient percussion could do. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nase Posted April 7, 2015 Share Posted April 7, 2015 it's not just close, it's a cover. this site is more about arrangement. good work though, sounds lovely. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timaeus222 Posted April 7, 2015 Share Posted April 7, 2015 To be clear, I only took a cursory listen for the arrangement comparison. I don't think there is enough work on this yet to say where this will or could go in interpretation. Here's where you (Nyx) get to work on that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NyxTheShield Posted April 7, 2015 Author Share Posted April 7, 2015 Hahaha so i have the sound, and just need to make this less conservative and my own variation right?? I think i can make it work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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