Secret of Mana - A Wish

[NyxTheShield]

I think this game was one of the first ones that made impact on me so i felt like making a cover of A Wish, my favourite track from the game. Any feedback is greatly appreciated (I know is in youtube but any feedback that can help me make this OCR worthy would be good, i am willing to heavily change it in order to achieve that heh)

Edited April 5, 2015 by NyxTheShield

[timaeus222]

It's nice, but as it is, though the short length doesn't necessarily constitute a *NO*, one could argue that it's too short for the amount of development it has. At the moment that's probably the only issue here. So, maybe make it longer, into a more complete work.

[NyxTheShield]

It's nice, but as it is, though the short length doesn't necessarily constitute a *NO*, one could argue that it's too short for the amount of development it has. At the moment that's probably the only issue here. So, maybe make it longer, into a more complete work.

I think i have a great idea. Would some vocals spice this up haha? (Female)

[timaeus222]

Needs more than just additional vocals. Right now as I compare to the original, it's pretty close/conservative. As you make a longer arrangement, a soundscape as sparse as this one asks for both more compositional and textural development. Maybe some immersive pads, bells, and maybe ambient percussion could do.

[Nase]

it's not just close, it's a cover. this site is more about arrangement. good work though, sounds lovely.

[timaeus222]

To be clear, I only took a cursory listen for the arrangement comparison. I don't think there is enough work on this yet to say where this will or could go in interpretation. Here's where you (Nyx) get to work on that.

[NyxTheShield]

Hahaha so i have the sound, and just need to make this less conservative and my own variation right??

I think i can make it work