Liontamer Posted July 30, 2006 Share Posted July 30, 2006 Yo all. I have just started to remix and im starting to get the hang of it. I have never posted any remixes her befor so im not really sure if im doing this right, and im not sure if i did the ID tags right. if not, please let me know and i will fix it. Anyhow. I havent decided on any artist name yet so im going with my last name "Gager". Anyhow. This is the first remix that i can say that i really like. Its a remix of the good old "Super mario bros" theme with alittle electro feeling to it. Hope you guys like it so I can share it with the rest of the world the song can be dowloaded from my webbpage at: Sorry for low speed but its my own webbserver and its on a crappy DSL line in nothern sweden. Hope you guys like it /Gager Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkeSword Posted July 30, 2006 Share Posted July 30, 2006 Cute little arrangement, but you've gotta have more variety in your soundscape than a bunch of saw waves. This also ends up having a really BGM feel to it. It's not much of a standalone piece; its arrangement pretty much just goes through the overworld theme a few times, without any changes between the iterations. That ending is terrible. Needs more varied sounds and some actual arrangement, rather than just repeated 8-bar phrases. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vig Posted July 30, 2006 Share Posted July 30, 2006 yeah...really bland. vanilla. Variety is the spice of life. The wave of the future. the language of love. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Liontamer Posted July 30, 2006 Author Share Posted July 30, 2006 http://www.zophar.net/nsf/smb1.zip - Track 1 ("Overworld BGM") At the start, I at least liked the personalization ideas here. Decent job giving some depth to the soundscape. The harmonies are a bit rough at times. Wish the drumbeat varied up more; you had a nice pattern there, but it never changed up. The others are right in that the arrangement needs more substance. Beyond 1:15, there's nothing new than the same few bars being arranged the exact same way, and that just doesn't work for a 2:28-long track. Get even more interpretive with the arrangement and try to develop new ideas. Decent first sub; a long way from having a chance at passing, but you at least show some good basic skills. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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