A Chronicle of Ivalice (Final Fantasy Tactics)

[Thirdkoopa]

Saxophone Quartet!

Track: https://dodarchive.dwellingofduels.net/23-03-Spinoffs/08-Lucas Guimaraes%2C Charles Ritz%2C Jess Destramp%2C Thomas Kresge%2C Daniel Caton-Final Fantasy Tactics-A Chronicle of Ivalice-DoD.mp3

Original Track: 

 

Please let me know anything I can fix up before sending it over for OCR Review

Edited June 26, 2023 by Thirdkoopa

[Hemophiliac]

Evaluation:

0:00-0:23 Source
0:24-0:42 Continuing the rhythm from the original here, with some of the progression of the source.
0:43-0:50 Source
0:51-1:12 Source
1:13-2:06 New material?
2:07-2:18 Source/interpretation
2:19-2:30 Progression from the source
2:31-2:52 Chord progression from the source I think
2:53-3:13 Fugue-like interpretation of source
3:20-3:42 Source passed around to multiple parts
3:43-4:04 Ending

244 total, 146 of source.  There's enough there.  I think the debate would be if others agree with my breakdown.  I could see the 0:24-0:42, 2:19-2:30 both being considered new material by others, because it doesn't immediately stand out as being from the source.  It's possible it got a bit too far from it.  If you don't agree with my breakdown, I would suggest including your own breakdown on submission.

At 3:14 I totally thought that we were about to get some X-Men the animated series cameo XD.  The recordings are clean, and are sufficiently loud throughout. It also looks like a limiter was applied an there are a few areas that have the tops clipped off.  Suggest backing off the gain a little bit before submission and you'll preserve the full dynamic without clipping those wave tops off. (0:57, 4:02 for example).  Sounds complete otherwise.

[Hemophiliac]

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