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Posted
the original decision thread is here: 

source breakdown remains the same. 

changes for the resub: 

- tried to tighten the timing in general, especially in the middle section
- changed some of the shaker patterns to add more dynamics,
- unmuted the handclaps track i've recorded for the original version

special thanks to Argle in the OCR discord for helping me fixing the timing.


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Sky Shark - Stage 2

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  • 2 weeks later...
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Like I've come to expect from tibonev, this is a clean resub that does a diligent job of addressing all the points raised in the first round of voting! I don't have a lot of notes, this tightened up the timing across the board without making the song feel robotic, and makes some subtle tweaks to improve the dynamics across the rest of the track just for good measure :) This is how you do it!

YES

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my main concern with the last version was the timing across the board.

opening faster runs at 0:12 still rush a bit, but it's not bad and makes it clear that it's live, so it isn't as big as deal as some elements last time around. the faster clapping section around 1:06 really sounds great - it's timed just right to feel like a busker or street performer. 1:27 is oodles better than last time around, and the solo section sounds great. the octave section at the end is a great ending to the track.

loads better this time around, very easy vote. nice work!

 

 

YES

  • 2 weeks later...
Posted

This is my first time hearing this mix.  Those are some fast triplets starting at 0:12!  They sound just a bit clunky and rushed as proph said.  I like the alternating-octave triplets at 1:27 and the doubled-octave triplets at 2:25, both of those sections flow more naturally to my ears.  Overall this sounds competently played and is very pleasant to listen to.

YES

  • Liontamer changed the title to OCR04904 - *YES* Sky Shark "El Gran Timoteo Cayendo" *RESUB*
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