prophetik music ⚖️ Posted October 27 Posted October 27 (edited) Hey Judges! I'll try to keep this shorter than my other writeups. This arrangement is for Vodou Queen's unofficial "An OverClocked Halloween" album. I've been spitballing a Halloween-y Jupiter Lighthouse arrangement since 2015-ish, and executed on it somewhat with an ersatz original in 2023. I pulled a good chunk of writing and production ideas from it to make this, so it's come full-circle, in a way. The idea was to do a slow-burn, John Carpenter-esque arrange with the pace of a score, but hopefully the more bombastic reprisals of the A and B sections for the crescendo are a good enough "reward" for all the disorienting tempo changes early on. The 2:40 section was always going to use low brass, but credit to Queen to reminding me The Shining's opening does the same thing, so I included a couple references to it (ending brass, distant voice FX). Instrumentation leans early 80s because of the reference tracks, but there are a couple early 2000s-sounding production cues just for fun, like the Golden Sun instrumentation (mostly a Roland SC-55) and the Metroid-y MicroKORG sounds. Xaleph also noted the stabs of the music box and flute from 2:18-2:40 are a 2000s-y scoring technique and I had them sustain more and more over time based on some feedback from him. I also want to give thanks to the OCR Sages, Judges, and general community. On a more broad note, my first couple subs (Hydraulic Beat, Prog Wrong/Enmity) were made concurrently and have some recurring issues with too much low end, overcompression, etc. because of my workflow from roughly 2019-2023. Over the last year I've gotten a ton of feedback and VST recommendations, including some trial-by-fire testing thanks to Game Set Mash 3, and I feel a lot farther along in terms of quality. I think of myself as more of a producer than a writer, and I would consider this my "sophomore effort" mix in the context of submitting to OCR. Games & Sources Primary source is Jupiter Lighthouse from Golden Sun: The Lost Age Audio: Source breakdown Note: Jupiter Lighthouse uses an E -> D -> F -> C# -> F# -> F progression for its "A" and "B" (sitar) sections which is used a lot here. 0:00-0:30 original ambience; tuba is a modulation of Jupiter's sitar part 0:31-1:04 ambient but begins using Jupiter's chords, strings, and flute 1:05-1:41 modulation of the rising music boxes in Jupiter plus some small nods outlined in micro-references 1:42-2:18 Jupiter "A" section, interpretive synth arp and synth voice countermelody 2:19-2:39 original arp with Jupiter-themed production 2:40-3:22 expansion of Jupiter "A" section for brass 3:23-3:50 Jupiter "B"/sitar section; freestyling strings and brass; timpani from Walking Forward With Determination 3:51-4:19 nod to The Shining (see micro-references); outro Micro-references / sampling - Music box at 1:10 references intro to Yallam from GS:TLA - Mandolin at 1:14 references intro to Sadness and Despair from Golden Sun: Dark Dawn - Ending brass at 3:54 is riffing on 2:26 of The Shining's main titles. - A couple horror SFX (female "yell", aleatoric string FX; used in the intro and elsewhere) are either samples from Halo: Combat Evolved or use the same Proteus X Composer synths. - Heartbeat SFX (2:33, ending fadeout) are from 3:25 of Tim Follin's intro to Ghouls 'n Ghosts on the C64. Production/arrangement reference tracks include The Shining above and The Shape Hunts Allyson, from Halloween (2018 film). Edited 1 hour ago by Hemophiliac closed vote
prophetik music ⚖️ Posted October 30 Author Posted October 30 what a weird original. opens with some interesting sound design. 0:30 does start to bring in some of the chord structure of the original, but it's pretty far afield from that. 1:05's ascending lines are more recognizable. the juxtaposition of the music box next to the synth leads is interesting. we get a beat around 1:43, and i like the space that the bass provides by not playing constantly here. the brass and sfx at 2:02 are surprisingly menacing when combined with the tempo change there. 2:19's original section is a bit of a break before we get back into a brass-heavy section. i don't really hear the A section in here, and the long swell on the brass instrument you're using becomes pretty obnoxiously clear. the 'b' section at 3:24 is a little clearer where it's coming from, and it functions as an outro. i think you've really nailed the vibe you were looking for here, for sure. there's a real dark, intense thriller-style feel to what's going on. i'd say though that i really don't get anywhere near enough source to my ears, which is my main concern. i hear what i'd attribute to source at 0:51-1:15, 1:22-2:18, and 3:22-3:51, which is 109/255 seconds (43%). maybe i'm missing something here? i separately found the track to over-use those brass samples that really got exposed at around the 3:00 mark. but i liked the overall direction of the piece, and like i said earlier i think the vibe's great. i just don't think it has near enough source as compared to all the other references. NO gravitygauntlet 1
jnWake ⚖️ Posted November 18 Posted November 18 Spooky! This one begins with some creepy pads and sound design. There's some string melodies in the background but I'm not sure they're echoing the source. At 0:30 we get a lead of sorts and some movement on the bass before we get some chords on whistle-ish instruments. At 1:07 we get the source's main arpeggio line on many different instruments for a while, until at 1:44 things settle down. Soundscape is really cool, every instrument sounds great and I love all the effects on the background. At 2:19 we get a new section that's quite fun and at 2:44 we get the main arpeggios back alongside some original writing. This section gets a bit noisy with all that's going on, makes it hard to focus. At 3:22 we get a repeat of the main arpeggio/melody of the source. Melody is on a sitar-ish instrument that doesn't cut through the mix all that well. At 3:51 there's a break, then The Shining reference and the track ends. What a spooky/tense track! Production is very well done, the mix is mostly very clear (only a few spots with a bit too much going on) and the sample choices fit the idea perfectly. I particularly loved all the additional sound design efforts with all the SFX and transitions. At some points, especially towards the "climax", the production reminded me of the Zerg Themes from Starcraft, maybe it'd be interesting to try cover one of them on this style! Arrangement will be the main point of contention here. While the track's structure is good, with enough build-ups and breaks to keep an interesting pace, source usage is quite on the edge. As per your own write-up, source is clearly used from 1:05 to 2:18 and then from 2:40 to 3:50, for a total of 2 minutes and 23 seconds. Since the track lasts 4 minutes and 19 seconds this barely scrapes the 50% "unofficial rule" but I don't think the source is really dominant on all those sections. In particular, from 2:40 to 3:22 while you can definitely hear the main arpeggios I don't really think the source is the main focus so I can't completely count that part as dominant source usage. Overall, while this is a really cool arrangement with great production, I agree with proph that source usage isn't dominant enough for this to pass. I think making source usage clearer from 2:40 to 3:22 or adding some more direct quotes of the "melody" from the source in earlier parts of the track would help. NO gravitygauntlet 1
Hemophiliac ⚖️ Posted 1 hour ago Posted 1 hour ago Nailed the 80s John Carpenter vibe 100%. From the synths to the ambience, you hit it on the head with what you were going for. I enjoy the suspense and throwback feel. Even with the breakdown I struggle to make the connections to the source. It's very difficult to associate a chord progression with being memorable and associated to a particular source tune. I have a hard time saying that a progression is the thing that can link us back to it (unless the source is primarily just progression without other elements like melody or a strong rhythmic component). As the others have noted, this simply does not have enough source usage being dominant. 1:05 is when I really begin to understand the source usage with the ascending arp line. I do get the connection with the chords just after 0:30 but it's just not the memorable part of the source. I felt the production was good and clean, and it is really cool that tubas and low brass got to carry the melody for a while. What's here is very creative and engaging, but this came down to not enough dominant source usage, I would like to see a stronger connection to it. NO gravitygauntlet 1
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