Rozovian Posted September 27, 2007 Posted September 27, 2007 Dont submit it yet, it'll be rejected for being repetitive. I like the sounds. Not sure how high-quality they are, but they're cool. The wave thing in the background, tho, I'd lose that, or only use it to bridge this with another part. I suggest you write a second part to this, preferably with a wider harmonic range (this one's just up in the high range). You can bring it down an octave, add a bass instrument, and make little breaks from the rythm a little here and there. Build that up to a grand finale, and end the song. As it is now, it's really nothing more than a nice little loop. Argh, second time listening it through, and I'm getting tired of it. What does that tell you? Quote
cawnil Posted September 29, 2007 Posted September 29, 2007 6/10, but with potential (lol) The wave sounds good the way it is, I think. But this mix definitely needs some more going on. Minimal acoustic drumkit, minimal lead synth/harmonic pads, something. And a definite ending. Quote
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