Mythbusterbro Posted September 26, 2007 Share Posted September 26, 2007 Cancelled! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rozovian Posted September 27, 2007 Share Posted September 27, 2007 Dont submit it yet, it'll be rejected for being repetitive. I like the sounds. Not sure how high-quality they are, but they're cool. The wave thing in the background, tho, I'd lose that, or only use it to bridge this with another part. I suggest you write a second part to this, preferably with a wider harmonic range (this one's just up in the high range). You can bring it down an octave, add a bass instrument, and make little breaks from the rythm a little here and there. Build that up to a grand finale, and end the song. As it is now, it's really nothing more than a nice little loop. Argh, second time listening it through, and I'm getting tired of it. What does that tell you? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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cawnil Posted September 29, 2007 Share Posted September 29, 2007 6/10, but with potential (lol) The wave sounds good the way it is, I think. But this mix definitely needs some more going on. Minimal acoustic drumkit, minimal lead synth/harmonic pads, something. And a definite ending. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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