This mix has but one downfall: the introduction of the guitar. It just feels out of sync. Im not sure if thats a noise gate issue or something else, but i focus on it every time i listen to this song.
Once the guitar is going, it carries itself excellently. To the point where i completely forget about what i just said.
By about 1:50, the tune is really quite pretty, isnt it? Yes, very much so!
Please never stop using real instruments! It adds so very much!