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Um, here's a recent original, I suppose? It's an opening theme.


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The only link I have is YouTube, and I thought I'd share, because I finished it just a few days before joining OCRemix. It's called Sur la terre des hommes libres, which is French for "In the Land of the Free".

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mhumXe-hRLo

Wrote this in 2009, but this is the most recent version of this song.

Please, do tell me what you think!

P.S. I'm aware that I didn't hold my breath in places, and I should've done so. I'm also aware that the vocals might sound a bit muddy, but I can't do anything about this yet: I've only got an integrated PC mic to use, and I'm a penniless student! :P

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I liked it. Other than the muddy vocals, I think it was pretty good. I have to admit though, in my opinion, it does get a little repetitive after 4:02. Maybe you could raising the chorus up a key or something at that point? Maybe just to give it some variance. Or maybe even add a violin or something soloing under the chorus? I'm just putting out some ideas.

Overall though I liked it.

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