Joe, sounds like you have alot of talent outside of the OCRemix scene! Would fit perfectly in the current pop-focused industry. Vocals reminds me alot of "That Thing You Do." Wickedly catchy. :cool: Have to agree with a post a ways back. "Keep fighting for the right of the one you so truly mend." Replace the words with some synonyms and you are also saying, "Fight for the right of the one you sincerely repair?" "Mend" in a relationship sense means you are fixing one that is broken... It really does not work, how you are using it. How about, "Keep fighting for the right of the love that you defend?" Not that I was really listening to the lyrics, but he brought it up The second version sounds just like what it is - a remix. Stick with the original. Anyway, great song. It compelled me to rejoin the forums just to congratulate you on it. You really have some skills there.