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Chickenwarlord

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  1. Main lead is a little bit generic, but the background is pretty chill. A little more variation in the harmonies when the melody isn't present would be nice. 1:50- onwards is a good groove.

    A little bit more playing with that lead synth to make it more interesting would be great and do wonders for this mix.

  2. Solar Man

    - Actually, this one is less of a remix and more of an amusing Remake.

    Pump Man

    Nitro Man

    Hornet Man

    Medley:

    Seriously, there are a lot of terrible mixes to wade through on youtube, but occasionally you'll run across some fun ones.

  3. Your lead in the opening is really bright, loud and consistent. I would enjoy more playing around with its timbre and register. Pads are a bit on the blandish side.

    That synth strings build towards the end needs something more. More presence, maybe something small moving in the background, but all alone it sort of falls flat.

    Bass could use a tiny bit more presence.

    A little bit more variation in the piano arpeggios (occasional switch ups, syncopations, fun panning) would be excellent additions.

    Good luck, you have a pretty solid base here.

  4. If anyone wants to compile a master list, preferably grouped by time sig & with links to OCR song pages (if available) and YouTubes, it's possible we could find a way to track this in our database at some point...

    It's not that we're ignoring this, it's just that it's pretty time consuming and daunting for any one person. Maybe a thread similar to the OCR Mascot project is in order?

  5. It's actually all of my USB ports on my laptop which are fried. They can't read anything at the moment and are taking away my mouse abilities (since the touchpad is out of commission as well).

    Technically, I could still enter with only keyboard-piano; but I'd have to play it perfectly in order for anything I create to be listenable.

  6. The guitar is a popping out a bit too far in the early mix, IMO.

    Near the beginning it feels like the strings jutting out awkwardly (I think you should keep them center panned until the mix fills up and see if that helps them feel less distant) from the background, but as the track progresses that is fixed.

    Seems like once you get everything going it gels really well, but there are some soundscape hiccups along the way.

    Great use of panning and volume on the arpeggios.

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