Well, this has some amazing quality stuff. It has a nice atmospheric feel. But, it is too repetative. It sounds like it is a midi rip. If it wasn't for the repeating sequences, this song would only be about 1:13 long, rather than 2:21. Add some original interpretation into this song.
Also, the drums may want to be spiced up. Include a snare and a crash cymbal.... but as you said, this is indeed a WIP. So that probably will happen.
Looking forward to an update!
-RomTom