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Obtuse

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  1. Welcome to OCR!

    I like the track. It has great potential. Musically I like it.

    Here are some of my observations:

    Overall:

    The Bass drum seems like it uses too much of the frequency spectrum. This is just my opinion. I think you should use a kick that doesn't have that added sustain. Or possibly reduce the sustain of the kick. Hip Hop Kit 2 has a very good kick in my mind. Mess around with it and see what you think.

    I can barely hear the hi hat when it is used. Bring it out a bit.

    Some of the instruments compete with each other in the frequency spectrum. Try using EQ on each instrument to get rid of frequencies that compete with each other.

    0:02 - 0:18

    The Bassline gets buried by the melody line.

    0:48 - 1:02

    The non bass-line parts are too quiet. Bring them out or bring down the bass-line

    1:20 -1:37

    There is a pad in here that feels like it isn't going anywhere. You could use automation to change the volume of the pad. Make it grow or make it rise and fall. Or whatever else you think would be awesome.

    2nd Half of track

    The piano sounds awesome.

  2. I like this. It has a great vibe.

    I have one major beef with it. The 8 note repeated phrase (Square wavish sound) goes nowhere. It just keeps repeating. It's really monotonous. I personally think it would sound

    great without it. You have so much other interesting stuff going on.

    If you are keen to keeping that sound in there, perhaps you could change the melodic phrase or make it into a sixteen note phrase (vary the 8 note phrase and and use different notes from the musical scale).

  3. My awesome moment recaps

    1) Watching Metroid Metal. So good!

    2) Me dancing to q-pa's set. You were awesome man. I never dance but the music felt tight and I had to.

    3) Finding out that I have an addiction to Frogger.

    4) Staying up all night and talking with Moguta, Liz, Monobrow, and others at the DoD listening party.

    5) The OCAD podcast.

    6) Eating at Subway full of OCR people.

    7) Meeting all of you fine folks!

    8) Watching Zen Albatross make sweet chiptune music.

    Stuff that I didn't enjoy

    1) From the descriptions of MAGFEST on the site, I was convinced there would be a bass sitting there for me to play. Next year I will bring mine.

    2) I had to leave sunday morning.

  4. My goals in no particular order :

    1) Participate in PRC and actually remember that OHC is happening on thursday nights at 9 PM eastern. I often forget.

    2) Make my own original electronic music album

    3) Make looped Bass guitar music

    4) Learn to play the guitar better so I can play some screaming leads and rhythmic chords

    5) Learn to play keyboard better

    6) Work on getting some Project remixes done.

    7) Submit a few remixes with the hope of getting them added to this site.

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