PRODUCTION
- Too quiet - way too quiet~ I'd like to think I fixed that:-)
PERFORMANCE (live recorded audio/MIDI parts)
- Timing not tight enough~Fixed
STRUCTURE
- Lacks coherence overall (no "flow") - it doesn't go anywhere~hopefully fixed
- Not enough changes in sounds (eg. static texture, not dynamic enough) - but not a big deal here, there's dynamics to the writing that changes it enough imo.
- Pace too plodding - probably a symptom of the lack of flow~hopefully fixed
- Too repetitive - the result of not going anywhere and not changing in sound much~hopefully fixed
Humanizing: is there some way I could do more humanizing without deleting what I have? I tried the auto humanize feature of my program(presonus studio one) and it doesn't seem to be doing a lot. like you said I need to humanize more
I don't just slap stuff together anymore. as a result of that, I don't really go overboard with the instruments. If you need an example of the major influence of my style for this remix, check out Tattered Slippers by Darkesword.
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