Wow, I really like where this is headed. I'm not usually a fan of country type ballads, but you really sucked me in there. The piano part at the end is a pretty nice idea, but I think it could use some work, maybe a solo? Also, I felt that the transition to the piano part was abit awkward. Keep it up!
EDIT: Upon relistening, I think it's safe to safe the transition isn't awkward. Please disregard that remark.