Seemed far to close to the original , not alot of remixing involved. May wanna try to stray away from the source a bit. I'd recommend lessening those bells a tad and giving it its own mix. The usual idea isnt to give a reconditioning of the original song , but to redo the song with the sound you like. Give it a jazz remix , rock , metal , rap , jpop , DDR... you know , your own flavor of it.
Again , seemed far to close to the original , and trust me , i know the original backwards , forwards , inside out and all the inbetweens.