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    Three Original Songs(DnB & EDM)

    in Post Your Original Music!

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    6 hours ago, HoboKa said:

    So I can't tell with my shit headphones if the mix is perfect.  Seems like the production quality is pretty good.

    But, quick question, did you check the 0-65 and 65-125 hz range of your pads and synths?  That one will sneak up on you badly if you aren't using a linear sound setup haha.  And no, I can't tell if those are bad, so not implying anything is off.  bfjasjghjggfastd

    Thanks for the feedback! I have to check those. I've also noticed, that when I'm using wireless headphones, the drums and snares peaks too much and causes some annoying sound bits. I'm thinking about replacing vocals on the Visions song and making some modifications to Parts of Life drums

    Three Original Songs(DnB & EDM)

    in Post Your Original Music!

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    Hi all,

    I've done some gamemusic remixes in the past, but now I'm trying to do some original music.

    Here are three songs that I've done. Some of them needs a bit of tweaking I think, and your feedback/criticism would be nice.

     

    By Your Side ft. tg - DnB song with vocals done by tg

    Visions ft. Anne-Jasmine. EDM song with sweet saxophone and vocals by Anne-Jasmine 

    Parts of Life. A drum and bass smash up with sweet piano, mixed with some c64 strings.

     

     

    Platformer style Track experiment "In a Colorful Grey" WIP

    in Post Your Original Music!

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    Hi SlapMagic, the sounds are crisp and clear and song is all in all, like from some anime series(thats a good thing)!  I like the riffs and basslines.

    I'd like though, if you'd go a little lower on volume on the 'passing by' sounds at 56 seconds, 1min 56s and 3min 10s. I think they clip some of the song too when they're played

    Also I tend to find overall bassness a lil low on drums, and that's just my personal taste ofc.

    Hope this helps!

    Ra-Project - The Sun King

    in Post Your Original Music!

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    On 28.9.2017 at 10:32 PM, SlapMagik said:

    Hello Goat! I am assuming this is a work in progress, if not please disregard anything I post here.

    First off you got an epic song here but there are a few things I'd like changed and I know you have put this track up just 5 days ago assuming you have been working on it since. First off the vocals at some parts feel out of key and I know recording vocals can pull your hair, Your friend is definitely on the right path but I would like to hear him bring us into the track some more.The guitars sometimes sound a little too fat making them drown the pads/keys, maybe dropping the mid-tones a little could clean it up. Besides that, I am looking forward to hearing more of your work!

    Thanks for the reply and feedback of the song!

    We'll be correcting some of the vocals and instruments when we get the time for it. It is really good to hear opinion about the song, because what I think is, that when doing a song, you'll listen it as a composer+singer so much, that you come 'deaf' to some things, like vocals sounding off, instruments etc. That is why criticism is always welcome, and while doing same stuffs again it might be involving some arm hair/hair pulling, I don't really see that as a negative. When some of our friends listened the song, they were like "-yea it sounds nice"-, so we didnt really get any good criticism from them. Gotta ask them to be more precise I guess! And yeah, we'll need to keep more breaks of doing the song, so we can listen it with "fresh ears"!

    But anyway, thanks again for the feedback SlapMagic! I'll be posting the song again when it is redone :) 

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