Chimpazilla

I loved this game too, so much. I have actually never attempted to remix anything from the game, I don't feel like I would do the themes justice, they are just so good as they are! I also really love Colony 6 and Colony 9, but my personal favorite tune from the game is Gaur Plain, I just sit and stare and drool when entering that area and that theme plays. For this remix, I must concur with Brad that this is a great concept to reimagine this theme, but it isn't working in several regards. The synths are very simple, vanilla, and definitely out of date. The writing is super simple and often repetitive, and the drums are on autopilot. The arrangement would need more dynamics, varying the drum beat between sections will help a lot (even just adding an extra percussive layer like a shaker loop could help with that). There are places where major and minor occur together and that doesn't work at all. The first instance of this is from 0:32-0:35. At 0:35, that chord is a total mismatch between major and minor structure. Brad explained the issues extremely well. I agree that the workshop is going to be a great place to get advice on how to move forward with this arrangement and any others you've got going. The workshop here is a great place to start. NO

This is lovely. I do agree with most of the little nitpicks mentioned by the other Js, some of the violin attacks are slightly awkward, the violin is mixed a bit loud as are the guitars when they come in, the performances feel almost too loose at times, but it feels so real and organic, completely charming, it makes me smile. Great combination of instruments. Really nice personalizations on the theme, super nice work. YES

What a great time signature to remix this in! You're right it does make it sound very energetic and cinematic. This is really well done, the instrumentation is handled extremely well. The arrangement is terrific, full of dynamics and storytelling. Many textural changes and varying levels of intensity throughout the piece. This is wonderful, other than being too short (I want more!). Nice work. YES

The vocal sounds very heavily Autotuned, which is fine/dandy but I agree with proph that the tone is unpleasant, it is overly midrangey and grating and the lyrics are way too fast to be understood so it sounds more like a texture than a true vocal line. I also agree with prohp about the drums being on autopilot, and the sounds themselves are weak or are mixed way too softly to be heard properly and so they lack impact. This is a very heavy and high-energy soundscape, but the instrumental elements never change throughout the piece with the exception of the short bits of (excellent) guitar work (which could be mixed better, why is it totally mono?). The track sounds repetitive due to these factors (same instruments, same energy level, and autopilot drums), and it also feels somewhat fatiguing to listen to because there are elements playing in the same frequency range for the bulk of the time, to include the high end of the synths together with the vocals which have a lot of grating highs due to their processing. I really like the gating at 2:37, even though initially I thought something was wrong with the render or with my computer playing it back. Using the gating again at 3:04 felt just a bit cheesy since you had just done it right before, and nowhere else in the track; using a different effect right at the end would have been better, maybe a tapestop or something, but that's just a personal nitpick. I love the concept of this remix, but I feel like the arrangement is just a bit too repetitive, and it needs re-balancing (most especially in the drums so they can be heard), and the vocals somehow need to be less grating and not constantly compete with the other similar frequencies in the mix. NO (resubmit)

This instrument palette is utterly lovely. It's a tricky source tune to remix, but I hear it clearly here. Production is clean as heck. I don't actually have too much to add to what the guys have said, but I admit to also listening to this in a meditative state; it's really very good and very well done. Love it. YES

Very heavy soundscape right off the bat, but it's full and rich, and everything is balanced really well. What a fun, upbeat little tune! I love the vocal clips. The breakdown at 2:25 was a welcome respite from the heavily compressed soundscape, followed by some nice original noodling and then... it's done? The ending is rather abrupt and the whole thing is too short, but if that's my biggest gripe that's not too bad. I like it! YES

Just to be very clear, the mono aspect was not the reason for my NO. Although I disliked the mono-only soundscape, of course that's not a reason to reject, but I felt that the arrangement was too repetitive.

I have no problem at all with this arrangement being varied enough from the source tune, due to the total genre adaptation and the tempo and vibe differences. Very cool genre to do with this source! I hear what Emu is saying about the low end, it comes across as weak and nebulous. The lowest lows could have a monomaker applied (like 125Hz and below) and compressed, and that would tighten it up. I also agree with him that the snare is on the loud side and the snare's lows have been over-emphasized, making it stick out against the other drum elements and instruments. I also agree with Emu about the energy management in the arrangement, it does feel like it idles in "intro mode." After the actual intro, at 0:13, it feels like the exact same writing and instrumentation as it moves forward, only with a slow drum groove added. The drum groove stays the same until the breakdown begins at 1:21, and it feels like something is missing somehow, energetically. Then at 1:48, the same patterns begin again, same drum groove, same writing, the only difference I hear is a higher-octave guitar lead has been layered over the lower one, but the writing is the same, the backing guitars, bells, and the grungy arp thing are all identical to the first section. This second section would be a good opportunity to introduce some new sounds or interpreted lead writing, varied backing elements, etc. At 2:54 we get the first drum variation in the whole piece, and it sounds great, it builds and builds until 3:48... at which point we are at the outro. This is an odd arrangement. I am going NO on this, not as Brad has due to being too conservative (it IS, but the genre adaptation and slow pacing are enough for me), but for being too repetitive both in writing and instrumentation, and because the arrangement itself does not flow well; energy management is very awkward. NO

Luscious soundscape right away! Ok so it's a halftime groove, cool. The bass sounds great, I love the lead synth and the square backing synth too. Nice vocal padding, and I really like the chord variations. I agree with both my fellow Js, the track is too long for what it offers, because the feel of it is so repetitive. The drum groove never changes, once established, and I believe that is the biggest factor in sinking it. The arrangement needs some energy variation, which would include some variations on drum writing here and there, some fills perhaps, and for sure at least one drumless breakdown lasting at least 16 bars, building back up into your main groove for another full section and then outro. You've done a great job with the lead instruments and writing, and the solo is lovely. It would help if you varied the backing pad sounds at some point too, bring in something with a different flavor (and/or add some sfx, sweepy sounds, etc.), to highlight the changing mood of the piece (once you've varied the drums). This is so solid already, the mixing sounds great, it just needs more arrangement (drum groove, backing instrumentation) variation and this will be golden. I love it, please revise it and resubmit it! NO (resubmit)

I have listened to this several times, trying to formulate my thoughts on it. Xaleph is amazingly talented, of course, and the guitar performances by Zack are excellent. The production of this track is pristine, although I will gripe that the psy bass feels just a bit on the weak side, mixing-wise; I prefer more bass-beef in a psy production, a little more compression and/or volume. But that's a nitpick and a personal preference. I really enjoy the mixture of triplets and straight 4/4 throughout the piece. I adore psy triplets, they give me chills, always. The following is my personal taste and does not affect my vote on this track, but I want to mention it anyway. I don't really care for the genre mixing happening in this arrangement. The guitars are not a good match with psy, to my ears. The psy drums also do not compliment the guitar soundscape when they play together. I guess I am more of a psy purist, but again that does not affect my vote. I also don't care for the synth that plays at 0:27-0:54, it sounds detuned in a way that I find unpleasant in context with the guitar that continues strumming during that section, and it becomes abrasive to me when the filter opens up fully on the patch. The vocal comes in at 0:56 and she sounds lovely to me, although I agree it is tough to make out the lyrics. The strings sound luscious behind her, I love the soundscape here and the subtle arp patterns in the background. Love this part. The psy beat is pulsing up, and then vanishes, hitting full force at 1:58. This is when I'd love to hear the bass quite a bit louder than this, but I love this section. The squelches, synths, arps, and that gated clap, are divine. The drumfill transitions are terrific. The strings that start at 2:54 sound very good in this soundscape, as everything is ramping up in energy... then.... triplets.... omg I love triplets. This part is so wonderfully sparse and huge. The guitar plucks in this section work for me since they are sparse, but when the full guitar section returns followed by that wonky synth, I'm a little disappointed, since I have heard both of those sections previously. The ending of the track after that is quite abrupt. The track is obviously great, despite my gripes, and is very well produced, even if the genre-mixing is not my cup of tea. The other Js love this genre combination, and I am sure others will as well. The overall arrangement is on point and has great dynamics. I am not familiar with these sources so I am very glad that the other Js are familiar with the game OST and can easily pick out the source use. YES

I don't hear mud in the intro, what am I missing? This entire arrangement sounds very clean to me. Mixing and mastering are just right. Hard to believe none of these instruments are live because they sound convincing to me. This is a lovely, soft, slow-paced take on this source, and it is beautifully executed. Very nice emotional arrangement, lots of subtle writing variations and interpretations. I love it. YES

Oh yeah, this packs a punch, and is also dreamy. The drop hits with a wallop. Wonderful atmospheric work, along with a very groovy drum beat. The bass and synths are totally badass. Voiceover work is appropriate. Excellent soundscape, great production, flowy arrangement. The ending is way too abrupt, as the guys also said, but not enough to dealbreak. Let's go. YES

I agree with proph that these two themes go very well together, and this remix has great bones and great potential. But the sounds themselves are not doing this arrangement justice. The bells are nice, but the full orchestra sounds are too fake to work well. The arrangement itself is good although it has sections of copypasta as proph pointed out. If the repeated sections were varied somehow, in terms of writing or instrumentation, it would work, but as it stands, wholesale copypasta is a dealbreaker. I'll add that the sections are quite different in terms of energy, and the transitions between these sections are rather weak so that the flow is interrupted each time the piece transitions. I love the concept here, and I think this could be a great remix, but the sounds would need to be seriously upgraded, as well as remediating the wholesale copypasta, and more attention needs to be given to the transitions between sections. That said, I'd love to hear it again with improvements made! NO

What an interesting, simplistic style, but so much has been done with it, it's really impressive. The soundscape feels so repetitive as the drum and bass groove stays the same almost all the way through. The sounds are all so ridiculously fake, but it's all consistent, and the arrangement is groovy as hell, and there are great instrument and writing additions as the piece moves along. I am with Brad, this is just too cool not to go with just as it is. It sounds like an actual video game source tune. I like it! YES

I hear those two wonky bass notes that Brad mentioned, at 0:26 and 0:30, perhaps check if something happened at those two points. You could check the bass notes in a higher octave to see if they are the right notes (easier to hear in the higher octave, then change them back) This is really super lush and lovely, and showcases the talents of all three artists extremely well. It's a beautiful huge wide-open soundscape that tells a story extremely well. Production is pristine, methinks. Mastering is just right. YES

Listening to the source first, wow it is frenetic. I can already hear how this is an ideal source to be tackled by jnWake! The remix is full of energy and contrast right away, I love the little chippy interludes in between the humongous soundscape. Wow, this sounds so lush and full. Nice energy shift at 0:42, moving into a fuller section at 0:54. The instrumentation is typical jnWake fare, but the addition of the excellent guitars and bass and bits of chiptune is dynamite. The track is mixed so well; it's amazing to hear everything this clearly in a soundscape this full. I agree with Wes, there are a couple of loud/shrill sections, but in the grand scheme of this arrangement it isn't a big deal. Very easy vote on this one, let's do this. Super congrats on the DoD win! It was well deserved. YES

Co-signing with the guys, Brad explained perfectly. This is a very cute concept and fun listen but not what we are looking for. The sampling of the BG song is extensive enough to be a problem as he said. The drum loop is too loud and never varies at all. There isn't enough VGM source represented in the remix, and sampling of the actual game audio is a dealbreaker. I love this style and concept, and wouldn't mind hearing this again redone to be more in line with our standards! NO

I love all these themes! Rebecca and I are both Zelda lovers, so I am extremely familiar with these lovely themes. I agree with Hemo, I love what you did with Ice Ruins! This arrangement is a medley like so many RET arrangements, and like the other ones this flows (see what I did there) beautifully from theme to theme and the arrangement is cohesive as it moves and changes over time, telling a lovely story. The transitions are smooth as heck, especially moving into Lake Hylia, as Larry pointed out. The soft rain at the end is the perfect way to close out the piece. The mixing is fine, everything is clear and gorgeous. Mastering is just right for this style. This is a lovely romp through the icey/watery realms of Hyrule. YES

WOW what a piercy sound right off the bat, ouch. When does it stop? Never, it seems. Whatever this is, I'm seeing an RMS value of -3.0db RMS which is crazy CRAZY loud mastering. I don't see it clipping (looking at SPAN with "true peak" unselected); it is limited at 0db but it stays there nearly the entire time, causing that crazy small RMS value. I'm not even going to try to sort out how this remix relates to the original. Is it too conservative or too liberal, I can't even tell. Unfortunately this soundscape is completely unlistenable to me. The arrangement is completely repetitive due to the same instruments and writing, the samples are terrible and way too loud, the writing is very random and unstructured, and there is nothing melodic or motivic to anchor the piece for the listener at all. Definitely more work required here! NO

This mix does sound very well produced! But ultimately it is a midi-rip of the source. I downloaded the original and since the BPMs are identical I was easily able to cut and duplicate the sections that went into this arrangement, it is the source arrangement with some of the sections stretched just slightly to extend the arrangement, but other than that it is the same almost note for note. We need more than that for this track to be an OC ReMix, but as the guys said this sounds great and there are some cool unique bits in there. We'd love to have a more personalized version of this on the site! Hope to hear it again. NO

The synthy intro and outro do not match with the rest of the track at all, as Brad said. There's no source in the intro at all either, which can be totally fine, but the intro is so disconnected from the main body of the track, that when the drop hits at 0:25, it is extremely jarring. The intro appears to be in 4/4, whereas the guitar portion of the track is in 3/4 like the source song is, and there is zero signaling or preparing the listener for this intense change in soundscape as well as time signature. The drop hits suddenly and hard... which is fine, but it just HAS to be signaled somehow, either with hints of guitar (a few notes of source motif or something else) coming in over a longer intro, or some kind of upsweep, or even filtering sounds down to a couple beats of silence, so the listener is aware that a drop is inbound. So to summarize, the intro is fine, even thought is is sourceless and guitarless, but that drop has got to be signalled. At the drop section, the lead guitars are panned so wide. The bass that lives in the middle is quiet and indistinct. The kick and snare are the only other elements occupying the center, that I can hear anyway. There is synthwork going on back there somewhere but it is mixed extremely quietly. I think it is fine to have the leads wide-panned, but the backing synthwork should at least be audible and should have its own place in the stereo field. Leading into the outro, a quick sweep would help with that transition (I don't think it needs much more than that, like it does in the intro). For the fadeout, I recommend continuing just that first part of the melody, fade out on that bit of writing and don't transition into the next portion of the melody at 2:50, because that sounds like the melody should continue, and it doesn't. Just duplicate that first bit of writing and let it fade out on that. I really like this concept (and I love this source tune). The melodic interpretation and soloing is very good! The production isn't quite there yet, but I feel like it's close. I look forward to hearing this again with these improvements made, and having it posted on OCR. NO (resubmit)

Very lovely Mipha opening! I'm not a huge fan of such hard panning, the opening harp is heavily panned left, but when the rest of the instrumentation arrives the soundscape balances out. As a medley, this arrangement is very cohesive, and flows well (see what I did there?). All themes are easily recognizable. Lovely water and seascape sfx. Beautifully instrumented, as usual. The ocarina is very well performed as Brad pointed out. Nice work. YES

Still way too much headroom on the mastering side. Why? YouTube will normalize it, but people downloading the track will need to turn up their volume. Strings still don't sound completely natural, but this type of arrangement is very hard to get sounding completely real. The samples are much better than last time. The choir is much better. The cello sounds uncanny because it seems only one articulation has been used, a legato articulation with vibrato that enters very quickly. Each note is the same, and on the longer notes the entry of that vibrato is very evident. A keyswitched patch would have been significantly better, but I think this works well enough. The cello lead gets severely drowned out during the dense section, I can still hear it but it becomes part of the heavy soundscape at that section rather than riding above it as a lead instrument should. The mastering numbers indicate to me that the track is bordering on overcompression, while the peak value remains low. I'm seeing -4.4db peak which is odd. The RMS is showing as -10.6db which is quite loud. There are points in the track where I see a swell in the sub-30Hz range, often it is the timpani doing that. Those sub swells, along with any stray low-lows on other instruments that didn't get EQ'd out, are causing a sub/low pileup of frequencies that are stealing your mastering headroom and causing this situation. You'll have more mastering headroom without having to smash things, if you EQ low-lows and subs out of anything that doesn't need that range playing. And your peak value should be hitting more like -0.5db. Even so, I'm not hearing overcompression artifacts so I don't find this to be a dealbreaker. I still think this is a lovely arrangement of these themes. I'm borderline here due to the samples still not sounding natural, and the strange mastering, but this is enough of an improvement for me to pass it. YES (borderline)

Lush soundscape right away, acoustic guitar sounds great. The vocal sounds great too. Very interesting approach to this remix, it fits the original very well, while holding its own as a remix. I do hear the occasional pitchy-ness on the highest notes that Brad mentioned, but it isn't too terrible. All the instrumentation sounds great, drums and guitars are very well performed, the soloing is amazing. Vocal could come up a bit in volume when the soundscape is dense. The little bell outro is very sweet! The master is uberloud, but I don't hear any overcompression artifacts. Arrangement overall is terrific, full of energy and with nice dynamics. Nice work. YES

This entire track is in mono. I understand that original chiptune could only ever have been in mono, and this remix is done in a purist style. While not dealbreaker for OCR, the mono approach feels like such a HUGE lost opportunity to experiment with surprising blasts of WIDE STEREO after lulling the listener into a false sense of security with the mono soundscape. At 1:01 when the first big blast hits, that's when my ears are crying out to hear things in stereo. The soundscape does feel very cramped, and without utilizing any stereo space whatsoever, it would necessarily feel cramped. There's no way around this in 100% mono. I think the interpretation of this theme is very cool, and there are tons of fun ideas in this arrangement. The instruments feel samey, and the writing gets repetitive after awhile, but again all of that is due to the chiptune-purist approach. The drums are often on autopilot as Brad said. I am leaning toward a NO; I agree with Brad, it is just too repetitive. An arrangement like this could have flown back in Ye Olden Days, but in 2024 this is just too much repetition. To use such a limited mono soundscape, the arrangement and writing would need significantly more variation to overcome the repetitiveness in this remix. NO