Thanks for all the helpful advise! Means a lot and just to let you know I did improve (in my opinion) the song a lot from the one I originally linked.
Here is the new version of the Covenent Dance Remix.
https://soundcloud.com/f1re-dem0n/last-dance-of-the-covenant-2
Does it sound better? Or about the same as the first one I linked?
Also, I know it says "Final" but that may not be the case. I plan to make it MUCH better, but I am trying to figure out how at the current time. So for now, just ignore the word "Final".
Thanks again for the advise and help.