I did not expect the change from acoustic to electric!
I also did note expect the abrupt ending. If that was intentional, it really shouldn't be.
The drums seem to drop off beat quite a bit, and although they come back, it still throws a lot of the song out of whack. And the bell in the acoustic section could probably be cut down by about half time.
The guitars, however, are splendid. They are in time, at least with each other, and I enjoyed the harmonies. There should probably be some more lows in the song from the bass.