Rom Tom Posted March 26, 2008 Share Posted March 26, 2008 This is, indeed, a remix of the Ballad of the Windfish from Zelda, LA. Comments or criticism, whatever floats your boat. PLZ -Rom Tom Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evfan42 Posted March 26, 2008 Share Posted March 26, 2008 this is a very good interpretation of this track I think that at :16 when the lead comes in you should lower the volume on the harp, and bring the lead flute out a little more. from about :44 to about :48, to add to the balance, you can add a decrescendo then bring it back up to the same level it was at earlier at :58 your drums become boring after listening to more than 3 phrases of the same beat, you should mix it up some it'll add some more flair to it. Mostly work with your dynamics, right now you whole song is at one level, bing down to piano at some parts, then crescendo to mf, and so on play with it see what you get. lower your durms, raise the lead. but definitely bring that harp down after a while, it has a good supporting rhythm but. But as far as your instrumentation goes, I think you have a good filled out song, so basically work with your dynamics, and mix your drums up. it'll ad more of a flair to it. also like with your harp you can add little differences in your velocity so it sounds more like a human playing it and not so much like a robot and you can slightly (very very slightly) take a few notes and move them out of perfect sequence. hopes this helps Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunahorum Posted March 26, 2008 Share Posted March 26, 2008 anyone know how I can get around a throttled .mp3 download? I am going to have to have a talk with the network admin. The throttled speed should be set to at at least 10kb/s. 0.25kb/s is rediculous Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mirby Posted March 28, 2008 Share Posted March 28, 2008 pretty good, like the slow pace. one of my fav. tunes, and this makes me happy hearing it. carries a lot of emotion with it too. I like how at around 2:10 it gets a bit of a layered effect going. awesome work so far, in my opinion. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunahorum Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 I really love the pads going Gm, E, Bb, F (I think) I loaded up a piano patch and had a great time improvising over this song. Thanks - really enjoyed it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eino Keskitalo Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 I second evfan's tips. Good ideas with the drums/beat, add more variation and dynamics there. --Eino Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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