Xenocrates Luna Posted May 24, 2008 Share Posted May 24, 2008 Title: Let's Go!! Original: Lemmings 2 My ambient/techno version of this track. Please comment and enjoy (: *Note: I consider this to be my final version, but am open to comments and cool ideas to make it better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rozovian Posted June 2, 2008 Share Posted June 2, 2008 Source is certainly there, tho as repetitive as it is, it might need some shortening or some more variation. Not sure if you used all the lead melodies from source, you know that better than I do. Changing the chords or bassline for part of the track would be one way of varying it. Technically, it sounds good to me. There's some backing instruments that are slowly rising one semi-note at a time, it clashes with the rest of the soundscape, tho it's fortunately blurry (as applicable to sound) enough to not matter too much. If there's more source to use, use it, otherwise, vary what you've got, or shorten the track. I think this might make it onto OCR, but you should run it by both the feedback checklist and the submission standards before you submit. It's too repetitive and the changes are a bit too abrupt for my taste in this kind of music, but the soundscape is nice, and I have a feeling this is the kind of track that grows on you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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