Dyne Posted September 7, 2008 Share Posted September 7, 2008 So I've been working on this for several hours, and just wanted to get some feedback. I think there's a lot of potential with this one. So check it out, and let me know what you think. http://www.williammichael.net/music/remix_projects/bk_remix_update.mp3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rozovian Posted September 7, 2008 Share Posted September 7, 2008 Interesting. You know, I've heard a few of your wips, I think you're progressing nicely. Take some time to work with the instruments before continuing to write this. Specifically: - The bass should probably be replaced with something with much less modulation and a more clean punchy sound. - The first instrument that plays is fine in the intro, but once the drums come in, it's a little too loud, taking some attention from the lead. I recommend moving it (not the lead) up an octave and/or dropping volume. - Kick needs some compression and a boost around... 100Hz, I think. Snare should be louder. - I hear you've not just copied the source, which is good. The second lead you used could use some high frequencies, boosting the highs with a few dB (3 or so) would probably bring it out more without altering the sound it has. You're doing fine, man. You're improving. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ralphis Posted September 9, 2008 Share Posted September 9, 2008 The melody that comes in at :27 is out of sync with the rest of the track. The first note shouldn't start until the upbeat of beat 3. Hope this helps, you should hear a difference Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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