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Interesting. You know, I've heard a few of your wips, I think you're progressing nicely. Take some time to work with the instruments before continuing to write this. Specifically:

- The bass should probably be replaced with something with much less modulation and a more clean punchy sound.

- The first instrument that plays is fine in the intro, but once the drums come in, it's a little too loud, taking some attention from the lead. I recommend moving it (not the lead) up an octave and/or dropping volume.

- Kick needs some compression and a boost around... 100Hz, I think. Snare should be louder.

- I hear you've not just copied the source, which is good. The second lead you used could use some high frequencies, boosting the highs with a few dB (3 or so) would probably bring it out more without altering the sound it has.

You're doing fine, man. You're improving.

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The melody that comes in at :27 is out of sync with the rest of the track. The first note shouldn't start until the upbeat of beat 3.

Hope this helps, you should hear a difference :)

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