New chiptune - Mechanical Cavern

[Nario]

I made a new chiptune, despite being sick and having massive loads of homework!!! It's original, by the way.

http://dj17nario.googlepages.com/MechanicalCavern.it - For those who have ModPlug Tracker and want to hear it uncompressed.

http://dj17nario.googlepages.com/MechanicalCavern.mp3 - For those who don't have ModPlug Tracker and for whoever wants to listen to it on a media player via PC/MP3 player.

It's my first chiptune to have arpeggios in it. 0:53 totally reminds me of Torvus Bog. I hope you all enjoy it!

[Nohbody]

pretty sick. Beginning wasnt noteworthy or anything though

[Nario]

Thanks!

About the intro: I wanted to give off the impression that the rest of the song was going to sound just like that. If people didn't like the intro then it would give them a reason to like the rest of the song. I hope the way I executed the surprise is decent at least.

[TheHands]

I'm diggin' it a lot. I like the groove, and I like how it's fairly straightforward after the cute intro. For some reason that intro reminded me of the start of "I Am Not Your Gameboy" from Freezepop. I'd actually like to hear more come from this.

[OverCoat]

Or all the cool people can listen to the .it in XMPlay

It started off kinda dumb but once the arps came in it was pretty cool.

You should put a B05 at the end of the second to last pattern so it loops instead of having an ending. Also, don't forget song cleanup, n00b!

Good job though, I looped it a few times

[Nario]

Aww yeah, Mr. OverCoat! It's great hearing from you, good sir.

[RushJet1]

Start making NSFs already

This is pretty good. I agree that the intro is just there; it doesn't add much to the song and it doesn't really do anything. Once the rest of the song kicks in it's a lot better thought.

[Nario]

Believe me, I really want to make .nsf files. It's just, I have a barrier: figuring out FamiTracker. I'm sure I'll figure it out someday.

Also, thanks for checking out my song, RushJet1! Knowing how involved you are in the chiptune scene (and composing the music for a game, no less), it's a true honor to receive your input.

I tried contacting you on AIM so I could send you a link to my chiptunes, but every time I talked to you, you signed off immediately. Yeah... that was kinda awkward...

I'll probably update this in two weeks, so that it includes a mid-section.