chrono series "chronological gangster" mixtape released

[SpringTouzhit]

yo,

this is chronological gangster, a jay-z chrono series mixtape. 15 tracks, finally finished

need feedback...

http://www.zshare.net/download/184314789c97d245/

track list:

1. Intro [Presentiment]
   
2. Pray [Dragon God]
   
3. American Dreamin' [Longing of the Wind]
   
4. Hello Brooklyn 2.0 [On the Beach of Dreams ~ Another World ~]
   
5. No Hook [undersea Palace]
   
6. Roc Boys (And The Winner Is...) [Ayla's Theme] video:
   
   
7. Sweet [between Life and Death]
   
8. I Know [Corridors of Time]
   
9. Party Life [Radical Dreamers ~ Unstolen Jewel ~]
   
10. Ignorant Shit [secret of the Forest]
    
11. Say Hello [Tyran Castle]
    
12. Success [battle with Magus]
    
13. Fallin' [Death Volcano]
    
14. Blue Magic [Chronopolis]
    
15. Chronological Gangster [Chrono Trigger]

[DarkeSword]

Don't post your release in Community. We have a Works-in-Progress & Releases forum of this stuff.

[DJ Mighty]

american dreaming, hello brok., Chrono Ganster and Roc Boys flow really well together.

some of the others dont seem to mesh well like "Party Life". I dont think the melody goes well with it. You major problem is the bad sound quality.

To be honest i would like to listen to this again and give it a better review but you need to work on the sound. You need to go over the volume levels with the bass. It muffles everything out. Play with the EQ a bit. I think i would like more of the songs if there wasnt so much crackling. at first i thought it was my headphones but it sounds really bad on my computer speakers as well and they are pretty good speakers. its just too loud. i havent played with sound in over 5 years so hopefully you understand what i mean, i cant think of the correct vocab.